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Greers Ferry Lake, 5-7-2011

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We stand side by side, elbow-deep
in chilly water, searching for just the right
stone to send dancing across the top of the
lake.  You straighten, hands dripping,
and skim a piece of shale straight into the sun.
I can't tell how many skips, my eyes
blurring from the brilliance, and
blinking the tears back, I
send my own after it.  It's
a respectable toss, three spreading circles, and
as our ripples intersect, I glance
once more toward the back of your head.
Okay, so I'm a little late on the poetry month thing, but thanks to `Memnalar anyway, since it was his fault I was thinking about writing poetry at all. Dunno if I want any crit on this at all, but I'd like it if you told me what it made you think of.
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LunaticStar's avatar
I expected the tentacle monster to eat them. o_o